Second book: The kingdom built at the end of the first book gets a painful amount of infighting before being invaded. The infighting hurt, more than it did in the first book. (That is, it was painful for me as a reader; the first book probably hurt the characters just as much. :) ). In the above review, I talked mostly about the politics plots - there are a lot of those in the second book, and they're just as well done. But what I didn't mention before, and what is even more so in the second book, is that they are relentlessly interested in science. The wars are driving an industrial revolution, as they do, and the book talks about all of it. When there's a new weapon, there is a twenty-minute digression about how the scientists/engineers first got the idea from observation, how they developed it and tested it, and what it finally does. It's the history of the scientific progress of an alternate civilization, and it's fascinating. Still five stars.
Also, they're really bad at briefings - both giving them and listening to them. These two exchanges are within pages of each other:
But if the Eldest's involved, that means he thinks there's some way to increase Valinhall's power." Olissa looked unconvinced. "Is that bad?" "Depends on your definition of bad," Indirial responded. Simon waited for more, but the Overlord didn't seem inclined to say anything else.The Valinhall mechanic was pretty cool, though. Two and a half stars."That kind of link can be dangerous," Indirial warned. "I know you're not familiar with..." Indirial kept talking, but Simon stopped listening. He had heard enough.
"You're not dead?" she asks in a choked voice.I think horror often has flawed characters making stupid decisions to humanize the people and make the scary stuff seem more approachable? The characters aren't heroes, they're just muddling through, like one does. It could be you, or me. Except when the muddling-through mistakes are so frustrating, it breaks the bond. There are many ways in which I would be stupid if I found myself in a horror plot. I would freeze. I would probably flinch and jump and fall down the stairs. I would be not very useful in a lot of ways. Maybe I would even lie to a kid to keep them from being scared. But not to my girlfriend. Three stars.
"Not the last time I checked." I put her hand to my neck. "Do I still have a pulse?"
She smiles hesitantly. "Then it was just a dream..."
"Hopefully. What was the dream about?"
"I don't know. I was having a nightmare, then I thought I opened my eyes, and I saw..."
"You saw what?"
"A face in the window." She holds out her arm, pointing. "There."
I look at the window. The stark, leafless branches of the maple tree sway slightly in the wind, and a scattering of new snow drifts lazily in the haze of a streetlight.
Lisa whispers, "You don't think..." "Course not," I say, giving her arm a squeeze. "But I'll go look just to make sure."
Slowly I stand, ignoring the pain in my feet, and step toward the window. I press my hand against the cold pane of glass and quickly scan the street below.
And my heart clenches. There's a cluster of bootprints at the base of the tree, identical to the ones outside Lisa's house. A lone, cracked branch dangles from the trunk, like a broken arm, like something or someone was too heavy for it.
"Do you see anything?
"No," I lie. I turn to her, try for a reassuring smile.
I can see her question me for a moment, the slight furrow in her brow, but then she presses the heel of her palm against her forehead. "Guess it was just part of my nightmare."
"It wasn't like a voice," she said, after thinking about it for a few seconds. "I know I said it was, but that was the best I could come up with. It was something different. If a voice is raised lettering, something that stands out, this was the opposite. Like a word pushed into silence, the way you can make a word into clay. Silence shouldn't be able to do that." She paused---I knew she was trying to do her best to put into language something not easily explicable in anything but its own alien terms. "There was a mind behind that word. A monkey mind, someone like you and me, in a bone room somewhere, plugged into an alien skull. But do you remember what Cazaray said about carrier signals---that all we're doing is imprinting our own messages on something else? There was another mind underneath the transmission. Something dead, cold and very, very alien. And yet still thinking, or still trying to think."
Cheris knew about the Fortress. She knew, in outline, the most prestigious low languages and the distribution of wealth among their classes. She knew how many citizens the Fortress sent to the academies and the breakdowns by individual academy as well. And she knew about the fabled shields that ran on invariant ice, but everyone knew that. She knew many things, and she knew nothing. She could feel the inadequacy of her neatly ordered facts confronted by the cacophony of living cultures. Once she had looked up the Kel summation of the City of Ravens Feasting. She had seen her home distilled into a sterile list of facts. Each was individually true, but the list conveyed nothing of what it sounded like when a flock of ravens wheeled into the sky, leaving oracle tracks in the unsettled dust.Five stars, but it's the beginning of an arc and does not have a tidy ending.
"Captain Holden. I am Captain Christina Huang Samuels of the Free Navy. I will accept the terms of your surrender on the condition that you guarantee the safety and humane treatment of my people. We reserve the right to record and broadcast your boarding action to assure that all of humanity will bear witness to your behavior. I do this out of necessity and loyalty to my people. The Free Navy is the military arm of the people of the Belt, and I will not sacrifice the lives of my people or the unaffiliated civilians of Medina Station when there is no profit to be had from it. But I myself will stand now and forever against the tyranny of the inner planets and their exploitation and slow genocide of my people."
She saluted the camera and the message ended. Holden sighed, started up his broadcast again.
"Sounds good," he said. "We'll be right over." He killed the broadcast.
"Seriously?" Alex called from above. "'Sounds good, we'll be right over'?"
"I may kind of suck at this job," Holden called back
You know... no matter what you do, people are going to expect you to be someone you're not. But if you're clever and lucky and work your butt off, then you get to be surrounded by people who expect you to be the person you wish you were.